Where's is "written by Denny O'Neil"?
Bah hum bug!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bah hum bug!!!!!!!!!!!!
GimmeMuezzin wrote:That reminds me to get a move on with that Prologue 'novelisation' I am writing.
If any of you want to read it, just let me know and I'll post what I've written so far.
TehBatGetsBraked wrote:GimmeMuezzin wrote:That reminds me to get a move on with that Prologue 'novelisation' I am writing.
If any of you want to read it, just let me know and I'll post what I've written so far.
sounds ok. Do you have the rest of the prologue as well or did you write this yourself?Muezzin wrote:TehBatGetsBraked wrote:
Gimme
I wrote it myself. Anything that could be improved? Be honest. I'm thick-skinned. I'll also try and finish the rest of it...Batfan175 wrote:sounds ok. Do you have the rest of the prologue as well or did you write this yourself?Muezzin wrote:
It's well-written for a first try but I don't think we know enough about Pavel at this point to speculate as to what he's thinking about Bane's plan and i don't think we can say at this stage that he refuses to help him because of some ideal about human nature he holds on to. For all we know he could be the one who made Bane what he is and therefore he would obviously not be averse to experimenting on human beings, which would mean human life means nothing to him. I also would not use the word "demon" or "devil" too often because it kind of spoils the fun too early if you know what I mean ...or maybe it doesn't for those who've not been following the ens surrounding the film as closely as people on the forum? Apart from that it's a very good read.Muezzin wrote:I wrote it myself. Anything that could be improved? Be honest. I'm thick-skinned. I'll also try and finish the rest of it...Batfan175 wrote:
sounds ok. Do you have the rest of the prologue as well or did you write this yourself?
I'm sure the official novelisation will be really good. I envy the author because he got to read the entire screenplay.
True. It's my own shameless speculation. I just got a certain reluctant vibe about his character from the prologue and the virals, but I could be entirely wrong. Which is part of the funBatfan175 wrote:It's well-written for a first try but I don't think we know enough about Pavel at this point to speculate as to what he's thinking about Bane's plan and i don't think we can say at this stage that he refuses to help him because of some ideal about human nature he holds on to. For all we know he could be the one who made Bane what he is and therefore he would obviously not be averse to experimenting on human beings, which would mean human life means nothing to him.Muezzin wrote: I wrote it myself. Anything that could be improved? Be honest. I'm thick-skinned. I'll also try and finish the rest of it...
I'm sure the official novelisation will be really good. I envy the author because he got to read the entire screenplay.
This is true.I also would not use the word "demon" or "devil" too often because it kind of spoils the fun too early if you know what I mean ...or maybe it doesn't for those who've not been following the ens surrounding the film as closely as people on the forum?
Thanks. I'll get the rest of it done sometime.Apart from that it's a very good read.