Very very good. Awesome editing with a great music. You have good movies as favorite ones.

Have you read/liked it? I liked it very much, but the reason why I decided to try an adaption is that the book is based more on thought/emotions/feeling of Goldmund than actions by themselves and I was interested in finding a (good) way to transpose this to the film medium :) No. I didn't even know...

Andrea wrote: Narcissus and Goldmund by Hesse, even though I'm bit behind because of homeworks, but in a week or two I'll start writing more regularly

Thanks. Good luck

Andrea wrote:I'm starting to write a new feature-length screenplay, it's an adaptation from a book I loved and this isn't meant to be nothing more than just a mere writing exerciser.

Just for curiosity, what is the name of the book?

It's with a very good rhythm but the end happens with no reason. I think you could tell more story, but besides that it is very good. Emotional, with suspense, very well written indeed.

Very good idea. Written as you have written is a bit complex, but you can simplify it with a good script. Maybe it is too short to a feature film, but to a short I think its quite good

Good video. It shows how powerful the nature can be and how ridiculous our tries to control it are. It also shows how human sometimes can unite and help each other.

I don't know the story of Flash, and I think someone is planing to make a film about him. About your draft, the plot is quite good. I think is a very good start to the story of Flash, but the point that most concerns me, is if there is enough story to tell, I mean if the whole plot is enough big to ...

I think it's a good short.
EDITING/SOUNDTRACK: 5/5
SOUND/CINEMATOGRAPHY/ACTING: 4/5
SCRIPT: 3/5
I liked very much the editing and the soundtrack. Congrats to Michael Kristensen. The only thing I missed was why did he killed her?
OVERALL: 4/5

I have also didn't quite follow it. I think the music has some references to Inception's soundtrack. At least it sounded like. I would say: EDITING/CINEMATOGRAPHY/ACTING/SOUND: 4,5/5 OVERALL: 4/5 The girl freaking out was quite scary and I think the only bad point was the lack of script, at least fr...