The Way Home (Short Script)

Website · **MWalls** March 18, 2011, 4:08 pm

Hey guys, it's me again. I just had an idea for a short film a few days ago and tried to somehow write a script about it.
It's pretty short with only 3 pages. I don't really know how I should explain it to you in a few sentences, so please just read it, and tell me what you think about it.

THANKS

http://www.mediafire.com/?wlk8pn7br6b798v

**prince0gotham** March 18, 2011, 4:15 pm

You should add something I think. The ending lacks some kind of reason for the man to turn around towards the camera and the reason for the contact with the viewer in that moment is also questionable. Think about it.

Website · **MWalls** March 18, 2011, 4:36 pm

Thanks, I appreaciate it.

**henriquefialho** July 19, 2011, 10:43 pm

It's with a very good rhythm but the end happens with no reason. I think you could tell more story, but besides that it is very good. Emotional, with suspense, very well written indeed.

**Mason** July 19, 2011, 11:05 pm

Well written, but missing something which I can't get my head around at the moment. Good job, though.