Hello guys,
A few days ago, I said that I was tranlating my very first feature length script into English. I am doing this for the Amazon Studios thingy. Checking it out. Right now I am halfway through the tranlation and I thought I might give you guys a preview from what to come.
I wrote the first draft back in 2008. It was my very first feature length script, and I was very satisified with the result. Now that I am translating it, I found a lot of bad things in the dialoge. I have changed that in the English version. There is still one thing that I like to change about it, but I want to know if you guys can find the very same thing.
These are the first 45 pages of the script. The whole script in Dutch is 89 pages, but will probably be a few pages shorter in English.
Genre: Suspense.
Link: http://www.lastsunrise.nl/screenplays/H ... review.pdf
I'm not telling you more, except the fact that this script starts very slowely. The real action has not been translated yet, so please don't get discuraged if you are on like page 15 and still nothing happened! It will get interesting, even in these 45 pages!
I hope you guys like it! I will deffinately post a link when I finished the complete translation!
Cheers!
EDIT:
Here is the full version:
http://www.lastsunrise.nl/screenplays/Hysteria.pdf
A few days ago, I said that I was tranlating my very first feature length script into English. I am doing this for the Amazon Studios thingy. Checking it out. Right now I am halfway through the tranlation and I thought I might give you guys a preview from what to come.
I wrote the first draft back in 2008. It was my very first feature length script, and I was very satisified with the result. Now that I am translating it, I found a lot of bad things in the dialoge. I have changed that in the English version. There is still one thing that I like to change about it, but I want to know if you guys can find the very same thing.
These are the first 45 pages of the script. The whole script in Dutch is 89 pages, but will probably be a few pages shorter in English.
Genre: Suspense.
Link: http://www.lastsunrise.nl/screenplays/H ... review.pdf
I'm not telling you more, except the fact that this script starts very slowely. The real action has not been translated yet, so please don't get discuraged if you are on like page 15 and still nothing happened! It will get interesting, even in these 45 pages!
I hope you guys like it! I will deffinately post a link when I finished the complete translation!
Cheers!
EDIT:
Here is the full version:
http://www.lastsunrise.nl/screenplays/Hysteria.pdf
David emerges from the store slowly. He braces himself against a parked car and then keeps on walking in a nightmarish daze.
WE PULL BACK as David blends in with dozens and dozens of ordinary people, walking on an ordinary street, in an ordinary city.
WE PULL BACK as David blends in with dozens and dozens of ordinary people, walking on an ordinary street, in an ordinary city.