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My first short film: HEART CONNECTED (7min)

Posted: February 13th, 2016, 9:19 pm
by SINCEPTION
It's Valentine's Day tomorrow and I'm posting a cut of my very first short film, HEART CONNECTED. It's a love story of a couple in midwest! Please let me know what you think!

FYI The sound is being polished and edited currently.




Re: My first short film: HEART CONNECTED (7min)

Posted: February 13th, 2016, 9:51 pm
by AsianVersionOfET
SINCEPTION wrote:It's Valentine's Day tomorrow and I'm posting a cut of my very first short film, HEART CONNECTED. It's a love story of a couple in midwest! Please let me know what you think!

FYI The sound is being polished and edited currently.



Pretty good. Sound was my biggest problem but you said you're working on that, so that's good. Also, I think you could close on a stronger final image, but that's just me. Good job!

Re: My first short film: HEART CONNECTED (7min)

Posted: February 13th, 2016, 10:06 pm
by Allstar
Tarantino would be proud. :twothumbsup:

Re: My first short film: HEART CONNECTED (7min)

Posted: February 13th, 2016, 11:06 pm
by SINCEPTION
Allstar wrote:Tarantino would be proud. :twothumbsup:
Hahaha, someone send it to him :p

Re: My first short film: HEART CONNECTED (7min)

Posted: February 13th, 2016, 11:48 pm
by SINCEPTION
AsianVersionOfET wrote: Pretty good. Sound was my biggest problem but you said you're working on that, so that's good. Also, I think you could close on a stronger final image, but that's just me. Good job!
Thank you very much for the feedback and compliments :) :twothumbsup:

Re: My first short film: HEART CONNECTED (7min)

Posted: February 14th, 2016, 11:12 pm
by SINCEPTION
I'm pulling the link tomorrow, so I'd love to see any other feedback or notes from other people before I do that :) ty all