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My first short film: HEART CONNECTED (7min)

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It's Valentine's Day tomorrow and I'm posting a cut of my very first short film, HEART CONNECTED. It's a love story of a couple in midwest! Please let me know what you think!

FYI The sound is being polished and edited currently.



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SINCEPTION wrote:It's Valentine's Day tomorrow and I'm posting a cut of my very first short film, HEART CONNECTED. It's a love story of a couple in midwest! Please let me know what you think!

FYI The sound is being polished and edited currently.




Pretty good. Sound was my biggest problem but you said you're working on that, so that's good. Also, I think you could close on a stronger final image, but that's just me. Good job!
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Tarantino would be proud. :twothumbsup:
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Allstar wrote:Tarantino would be proud. :twothumbsup:

Hahaha, someone send it to him :p
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AsianVersionOfET wrote:Pretty good. Sound was my biggest problem but you said you're working on that, so that's good. Also, I think you could close on a stronger final image, but that's just me. Good job!


Thank you very much for the feedback and compliments :) :twothumbsup:
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I'm pulling the link tomorrow, so I'd love to see any other feedback or notes from other people before I do that :) ty all
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