A short film I wrote and directed as a final project in my production class. Take a look and chime in with some comments; I'd appreciate it. Unfortunately the audio isn't very good; the recorder we were using broke down half way so we were forced to pull audio from the on board mic.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2CFcolQpeh8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2CFcolQpeh8